Kia ora. This is a re-write of Goldilocks And The Three Bears. This is unfinished, and is made with my friend Anna. Check out her blog, too. Maybe you could find some cool work there.
(Anna @ New Windsor School)
Feel free to comment some ideas, or recommend some changes to the story so far.
FABULOUS!!! I can't wait to hear the rest. While I was listening to you, I couldn't stop smiling and laughing (at the right spots of course). Your voices of your characters, were so good and I loved their names. You really must finish this. Goldilocks has always been one of my favourite stories but I have many questions I would have for the orginal. I can't wait to see if your version would answer them for me. Please, please if you do sort this out and put it on in class, CAN I COME! Looking forward to the next installment.
ReplyDeleteHi, Petula. Thanks! I'll make sure you can come if possible...I will ask Mrs Ghosh if we can let you in a meeting once it is done. I am going to work on this after I make my second blog post. :) What are some of the questions you would ask?
DeleteYou have already answered the first one - Why was goldilocks (a young girl) in the forest by herself. I don't really want to say my questions as it might influence your story but I am hope that like the first question you just answer them.
ReplyDeleteAlright! I hope you will like the finished writing! Me and Anna are almost done.
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